Whitesock's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~|| Secret Journey [Demo]]

Nice (again)

I would recommend bringing out the moving line that you have going on towards the end some more. Right now it's being covered up a bit too much.

T-Free responds:

I'll see what can be done. Thanks for the review.^^

[Funk You, You Funky Fuck]

Great Job!

Sounds very funky. Good job!

[Lets, take it back.]

Pretty good

I like the piano and the drums quite a bit, though some volumes could be changed.

For me personally I like a heavy clap, so I would increase the volume on that for sure. Also the bass drum could use a bit more, but not too much.

I think the trance lead doesn't fit very well. Maybe try different instrumentation for that and use a more classical instrument, since hip-hop is generally tied closer to classical music (believe it or not) than trance music.

Destroyeric responds:

:o oh really, next i will go for more classical instruments then :)

ty for te comment

[BeatSource_Clubland Experience]

Excellent

I just had to say like so many others that 3 minutes in just sounds extremely cool.

Great work on this!

Ethalyn responds:

Hah thanks man =) Im glad people likes the song so much ^_^

[Late ( DEMO )]

Needs better intruments

I think the bass is just too low quality for this sort of smoother type song.

[»§« Coming Home]

Great job

The only thing I can think of is that the pitch of the singer seemed off from the rest of the song. I think it's a bit flat, but you should probably check it.

MaestroRage responds:

Trust me, Whitesock, if there isn't anything I look over and practice more, it's pitch. I promise you I didn't go flat in this song. I concentrated very hard on it, especially with the higher registers. Anyway, thanks for listening!
With love,
LadyArsenic <3

[The Paladin]

Nice. xD

This is pretty funny, I have to admit. It's pretty good though for what my expectations were reading your comments on it.

SkyMarshall responds:

Yeah well, can't make all dead serious songs :) Glad you like it man. Hehe =)